Kichui bolar nei.........khub valo hoyeche....kintu jemni nami dami lekhok der kono kajkei sorbotkristo bola jay na,etao thik serokom.....tumi aro unnoti koro,aro darun darun lekha tomar srijonshilotai notun jibon pak,etai parthona............kobita ta sotti khub valo hoyeche..........
Thanks to all of you for sharing your point of view... But, I have few already selected poems to publish... My exams are approaching.. So, might not be able to post for a few days...
Hope to get back soon with some more good poems.
As for my poems, haven't written much since this poem which, I wrote during the early December of last year... I'm not getting much time for myself these days... So, will try...
Wish you good luck for your exams. Lekhatar uttoron tai amra pathok ra chai. "Bela Bhumi" pore bhishon bhalo legeche. Purboborti pathok, shobdo choyon niye bolechen, kichu kichu khetre shobdo proyojon e kothin, ba bastob badi na hole, kobita ta ohetuk nomro poribeshon hoye jaay.
Jeebon er belabhum'r chora balite dube jawa jeebon er protichhobi ta odbhut rokom bhalo laglo.
Jodiyo kobita ti nichok nari-purusher jouno shomporko niye lekha noi, tobu pathoker ei notun point of view ta shotti e mojar...
Regular blog follower hole boktobyo ta onyorokom hoto... Nichok, nindashulov shomalochonar ichhe theke mon bondho kore pora pathok ke boli, kobita ti na bujhe thakle janaben, synopsis janabo... Ar same goes for publishing the comments... You should have read the entire post before commenting.
Ar to regular readers... I'm really hoping to get my life back. This brain damaging work load is almost killing me! Hope to post new poems soon. Have few really good poems. As to amar lekha, shotti shomoy pachhi na. Rather, amar shei khola akasher tarader niye katano jeebon ta kromosho hariye jachhe, so... jani na next kobe likhte parbo... But will try... See you soon... Meanwhile, bhalo thakben, ar bhalo rakhben shobai ke...
Thanks.... No offence to anyone, but protita manusher jogot ta thik tototei boro, joto ta se bujhte pare. Tai bole tar baire kichu exist kore na eta bhaba bhishon....
At Last! Kobitata eto bhalo legeche ar kichu bolar nei............
ReplyDeleteTomar kache ja expectation chilo exceed kore gache!
Lekhar uttoron ta oshadharon!
ReplyDeleteLayout ta shotti bhishon shundor!
ReplyDeleteKobitata pore shotti bhishon bhishon bhalo legeche!
Prothom bar pore ektu morbid legecheilo.
ReplyDeleteBut besh ko ek bar pore kobitata amar kache clear holo.
By the way, tomar Debate & Creative Writing competetion er result ta to janale na!
Debate er Topic chilo, "Bortoman e Shikhha-Shongoshkriti chorcha banijyikoroner namantor", ami agaist e bolechilam, First hoyechi.
ReplyDeleteCreative Writing er Topic chilo, "Bachlei bacha shohoj/Morle mrityu sunirghat", Diary format e ekta journal form e likhechi, First hoyechi.
Shokol ke motamot er jonyo dhonyobad!
pore valo laglo!
ReplyDeletetobe sobdochoyone aroktu hoyto sotorko hoya jeto!
Bridge ta ke ekta link to past & present death hishebe depict korar thought ta khub unique.
ReplyDeleteEtodin laglo next poem publish korte???!!!
Eto kobitar modhey matro duto?????????
Aro chai!
Kichui bolar nei.........khub valo hoyeche....kintu jemni nami dami lekhok der kono kajkei sorbotkristo bola jay na,etao thik serokom.....tumi aro unnoti koro,aro darun darun lekha tomar srijonshilotai notun jibon pak,etai parthona............kobita ta sotti khub valo hoyeche..........
ReplyDeletewhat took you soooooo long?????????
ReplyDeleteWrite more Tan!!!! Wish to read more from you!
Oshadharon!
ReplyDeleteAro porte chai!
Post er wait korbo!
darun laglo..aro chai
ReplyDeletenothing to say.... advut rakom valo laglo...aro likhben
ReplyDeleteawsome Tania di, fatiye diyecho!
ReplyDeleteThanks to all of you for sharing your point of view... But, I have few already selected poems to publish... My exams are approaching.. So, might not be able to post for a few days...
ReplyDeleteHope to get back soon with some more good poems.
As for my poems, haven't written much since this poem which, I wrote during the early December of last year... I'm not getting much time for myself these days... So, will try...
Wish you good luck for your exams. Lekhatar uttoron tai amra pathok ra chai. "Bela Bhumi" pore bhishon bhalo legeche. Purboborti pathok, shobdo choyon niye bolechen, kichu kichu khetre shobdo proyojon e kothin, ba bastob badi na hole, kobita ta ohetuk nomro poribeshon hoye jaay.
ReplyDeleteJeebon er belabhum'r chora balite dube jawa jeebon er protichhobi ta odbhut rokom bhalo laglo.
Shotti apnar lekha aro porte chai.
-Debashish Sinha.
28.02.2009
BHATER KOBITA...
ReplyDeletekobita(jodio eta kobita naa pathoker mone jouno sursuri udrek korar sosta opochesta setai bodhogamyo hoyni) lekho othocho pathoker samalochona prokash korar moto manosikota nei...........eta kon dhoroner shilpo aar kemon e ba tar shroshta??????????
ReplyDeleteJodiyo kobita ti nichok nari-purusher jouno shomporko niye lekha noi, tobu pathoker ei notun point of view ta shotti e mojar...
ReplyDeleteRegular blog follower hole boktobyo ta onyorokom hoto... Nichok, nindashulov shomalochonar ichhe theke mon bondho kore pora pathok ke boli, kobita ti na bujhe thakle janaben, synopsis janabo... Ar same goes for publishing the comments... You should have read the entire post before commenting.
Ar to regular readers... I'm really hoping to get my life back. This brain damaging work load is almost killing me! Hope to post new poems soon. Have few really good poems. As to amar lekha, shotti shomoy pachhi na. Rather, amar shei khola akasher tarader niye katano jeebon ta kromosho hariye jachhe, so... jani na next kobe likhte parbo... But will try... See you soon...
Meanwhile, bhalo thakben, ar bhalo rakhben shobai ke...
Lekhata bhishon bhishon mature... ager lekha ar etar sathe tulona hoi na dutoi oshombhob bhalo legeche, thomke thaka jeebon chirto khub bhalo dekhate perecho, shobder proti dokhol ta shotti bhishon bhalo legeche. Tomar exams kobe shesh hochhe? Please, tomar blog er notun reader ami, kobita charao godyo post korle aro bhalo lagbe.
ReplyDeleteCollege e shunlam tomar lekhata publish hobe. Khub porte ichhe korche, after all, first howa lekha bole kotha!
Thanks....
ReplyDeleteNo offence to anyone, but protita manusher jogot ta thik tototei boro, joto ta se bujhte pare. Tai bole tar baire kichu exist kore na eta bhaba bhishon....
khub sadamata lekha chara aar kichu i mone hoyni....
ReplyDeletekobita tar uttoron tai shob cheye bhalo legeche.
ReplyDeletenari-purush laage ni...
nari-purush byapar ta amar o obak laglo!
ReplyDeleteBorong neel gondho pelam
Neel mrityu.
ReplyDeleteNeel bhumi, neel golap.
Neel prem.
Ha, amar o ektu Naari prem, naari prem laaglo.
ReplyDeleteKon matha motar jouno shurshuri laglo?